Saturday, June 18, 2016

The Marathon (Complete)

The Marathon (Complete)
Nice to have this finely motivated work of my poetry back on display in my Blogger account after nine years. I'm pleased with the ending this time. I'll take a break before heading into my next long poem.

I: The Runners

Beyond the metaphysical divide
Where clouds of doubt may burgeon and confound
A contest was arranged to help decide
How ultimate salvation might be found

The marathon would draw an eager crowd
Whose entertainment stringers guaranteed
The brightly coloured pennants fluttered proud
Along the lengthy running route agreed

Contestants, two, assembled for a match
Of clashing methods to attain the goal
With one determined luxuries to catch
The other after credits for his soul

Pleones had a fine estate amassed
To elevate him high above his peer
By cravings was he reckoned to outlast
And by his ruthlessness, to sharply steer

Against Pleones, Veritus was plain
And modest as a champion can be
Whatever prize he undertook to gain
Would not be so immediate to see

The customary starting point was placed
With bystanders arrayed in ringing rows
As on the track, the centrepieces paced
Attempting to allay their nervous throes

In seven stages would the race proceed
Attached by an endurance testing trail
The first to each, by virtue of his lead
Would of his chosen bounty first avail

Pleones took his place beside his foe
And turned his head to give a spiteful look
But from the gruelling distance left to go
The gaze of Veritus could not be shook

II: The Marshes

The gun provoked a loud and cheerful roar
And, neck and neck, the runners passed the gate
As open country, both were headed for
Where obstacles lay patiently in wait

Their onlookers could cast restraining eyes
The whole way to the city's outer line
But treachery was free to exercise
Once deep into the marshes, they would wind

The ground below their feet grew soft and wet
And wild overgrowth would all enclose
When resolute, his accolade, to get
A shortcut off the trail, Pleones chose

Though cunning marked the corners of his grin
His first plateau reduced to steps away
The quicksand that he landed squarely in
Elicited a holler of dismay

As soon as Veritus perceived the yelp
He scrambled through the weeds towards the sound
And offering his sturdy arm as help
Returned the fallen one to solid ground

A measured space outside the muddy moat
Pleones thanked the hero with a shove
And paused for but a twinkling to gloat
Before he turned to claim the spoils above

He found a table set with jugs of wine
Each bottled in the foremost vintage year
He opened one to sate his palette fine
But, by and by, he drank the table clear

Believing that his rescuer had died
He fell into a comfortable snooze
The fitter man had nature's law applied
To make sure that the better man would lose

III: The Great Vortex

Though Veritus plunged head first in the pit
A tree root had his trailing shoelace caught
His clasping hand secured a hold on it
And up he struggled, to his former spot

Insisting to abide by rules of play
He went back to the point he'd furthest run
To cover the entire legal way
Until he reached the clearing of stage one

He found Pleones peaceful in a dream
The lawn a mess from drunken folly blind
And bathed himself in water from the stream
Pleones had not ventured more to find

Straight down the sloping thoroughfare, he strode
Restored for this most challenging of treks
Towards the spinning maze of carved out road
Known infamously as the Great Vortex

The topsy-turvy way that he was led
By rubber ground that traveled on its own
Proved that the only way to get ahead
Was running backwards into the unknown

Pleones woke in time to see his loss
But quickly moved to reassume his place
By sending out a bulging wave to toss
The upstart Veritus to idle space

Dishonesty was favoured by the route
So that Pleones smoothly crossed it all
A tangle of soft arms held widely out
Directed him to his next port of call

Sweet virgins from the whole surrounding land
Would make for him an adequate reward
He took the first one firmly by the hand
As out of sight, his rival was ignored

IV: The Cave

With more triumphant cheer propelling him
Pleones sought to deviate his course
Which took him into tunnels deep and dim
But guile was his favourite resource

He paused a moment to ignite a flame
When by a giant moth, he was beset
In terror, he ran back the way he came
And turned the signpost, vicious trap to set

Remaining in the lead, he trotted slow
And stayed within the arbitrary lane
Projecting out, of diligence, a show
Against his true desire to complain

The gallery of masterpieces shone
With signatures of artists hardly late
He left the paintings with his driver, Ron
And told him to collect them in a crate

Since Veritus had slipped into a void
He'd failed to lower down, the ground to meet
And would have probably become annoyed
To have to further do without his feet

To help him sink to where the ground had gone
He grabbed a passing bubble of hot air
The exit was a long and hard way on
Compelled to somersault the whole way there

Content to kiss the soil, he waived the bed
Though comforting and spacious was its lure
And hastened through the conifers instead
According to the next leg of the tour

Obediently heeding detour's note
He veered in a new line towards the south
And to the cave suspiciously remote
To disappear inside its gloomy mouth

V: The Vanishing Ravine

The bridge across the Vanishing Ravine
Hung weakly on a slender stretch of cord
Pleones went the jagged gap between
Then with his knife, a deadly notch, he scored

Confined by flat and hot terrain, he frowned
Deprived of any other path but right
And bottles of the grape in which he'd drowned
Conspired now to make his head feel light

The trusting Veritus, caught in the dark
Was forced to, on a makeshift lamp, rely
The fluttering was on him like a shark
Which proved to be a gentle butterfly

The play of light had taken him aback
Exaggerating shadows on the wall
But he remained tenaciously on track
And would not for the shrewd illusion fall

The shortcut all but cancelled his delay
So that he reached the gallery stripped bare
In time to see the driver pull away
And of his progress, to become aware

The badlands, their exhausting vigil, kept
Proceeding to the damaged woven link
And gingerly he could not more have stepped
Nor of his peril, had less time to think

Since then had sly Pleones put to use
The ultimate solution for the heat
A purpose for his pocket money loose
A rickshaw slave to help him best compete

He had enough to get him through the rest
And sauntered up to claim the local prize
A filled to overflowing jewelry chest
Of which a pharaoh's wife might fantasize

VI: The Old Forgetful Hills

The sureness of a rickshaw handler's grip
Of one who'd come along to find a fare
Let Veritus, his fatal tumble, skip
And let advancing forth remain his care

Though hard the beating sun rays, he endured
And measured every conquest with a stride
The treasure chest was empty, probe assured
A single silver compass left inside

The instrument would compliment his skills
To navigate in territory strange
And help him cross the Old Forgetful Hills
However far his course would have to change

But led astray by needle's failing tack
To where a creeping fog speeds aging's pace
His memory of how to double back
Was gone as years were added to his face

Of course, the faulty compass had by choice
Been left behind for Veritus to take
By he who in disaster would rejoice
And he who from deceptions would not break

Pleones jogged serenely round the snare
Rejuvenated by a homeward aim
To stadium and limelight's well spent glare
Once he was named the winner of the game

As long as he was leading, it was fun
And lawful conduct suitable to keep
He had by far the greater balance won
And wondered if he might achieve a sweep

With his new gleaming trophy, he'd make do
A dream machine to help him stay amused
His triumph was the only sense he knew
While Veritus grew creased and more confused

VII: The Healing Gardens

To switch to sun's advice had been astute
The stricken runner fortunately steered
Into the Healing Gardens, whose fresh fruit
Reversed his age in time to stop his beard

The sights and smells replenished him complete
Surrounding him, abundantly displayed
Which his forerunner, focused on conceit
To fanciful delusion had betrayed

His spirit reawakened for a sprint
He shortly found the room that held the thrill
And gathered up the party by the hint
Of the unopened, screaming hydro bill

The new account was ordered in his name
And creditors deterred him to collect
The style of misconduct was the same
For greater cause, Pleones, to suspect

Momentum from the gentle downward slope
Increased the lead Pleones had obtained
With honesty there rested little hope
His opposite, from even chance, constrained

The last of passing victories to seize
Before ascending to the seventh height
Expected, he, to cruise ahead with ease
And on the pedestal, to have his rite

There was, on platform six, sufficient gold
To ship away in heaps of bundled bricks
And dust enough to melt and fill a mould
His likeness, on a monolith, to fix

But aim to narrow down the winning lap
To one contestant, fittest to applaud
Would favour Veritus to turn the gap
Ahead, on the redeeming Path of God

VIII: The Path of God

Where treacheries come back to spinners haunt
And handicapped are those with morals flawed
Of regal claims, Pleones fell in want
Once setting foot upon the Path of God

With no escape from duly hardened stare
He bore his victim's passage to the scene
And on a level line, were put the pair
About to enter trials unforeseen

A number of conclusions, in review
Required reconstruction to address
For honour's sake, in full and public view
Who'd warrant more and who'd commence with less

The Path of God's first challenge was a shell
Through which the two contestants were to crawl
Which Veritus, from lessons learned, did well
While proud Pleones, in a mire, would fall

In knee-high rising layers ran plateaus
Pleones had to forfeit to surmount
As Veritus withstood familiar woes
His mounting score too quick to clearly count

Before the roaring crowd would lustre show
On who had most substantially progressed
A crumbling Pleones was laid low
By tests that suited second times the best

The victor's torch, by Veritus, was raised
To carry as the contest winning man
And by his glory, honesty was praised
And hope for noble cause, anew, began

For though it may demand a trying lot
Salvation emanates from faith within
To either shun for sterner sentence wrought
Or draw upon to ultimately win
  
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